Reviews for Give Up
Are You Writing From The Heart chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
Sadly, I find myself drawn to morbid sounding poetry, but sometimes I'm glad, because otherwise I'd miss gems such as this. It flows brilliantly and makes you think about each line before you can comprehend the next. It's incredibly articulate and the semantic fields you keep creating in it never miss a trick. I am very impressed. Well done :)
R. Sharmayne chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
You are amazing.

I think anyone can read this and feel it in their soul.
All Alone With Her Thoughts chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Wow, Ash, creepy. Creepy, but really good.

Rowan.
SirScott chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
The first two lines remind me of a bad shaving experience I once had.

I form images of a girl with bloody face with her body covered in bullet holes.

SirScott
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
I love how this poem is very angst-filled. The use of words like blood, razor, ect was a nice touch, but again, your final line just stops the reader dead. It's so sad, and gives the reader this urge to comfort this girl in the poem. Wonderful poem, very relatable.
DarkBlysse chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
"Digging, dipping, dripping

Out a lot more than blood"-That was my favorite part. It sounds so wonderful, rolling off my tongue. Bravo!
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Very sad... Well written as always.