Periods at the ends of sentences are nice.

The syntax was a bit distorted but the diciton was fair enough.

I remember reading this a long time ago, when you first wrote it. It made me smile then, and it just lifted my heart to new heights now. I love you, so much. Every word you wrote here...I feel the same way.

i love this poem. its really sweet. it makes me smile alot )

very moving...I don't know what else there is to say. Art.