Reviews for Love
Luna's Child chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Aww, such a sweet poem. :)
postcards from italy chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
omg! this is so beautiful! i love it!
CrystallineEyes chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
I love the way how you put simple words but deep meanings.

Great piece.
Anjel Kitty chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
I liked this. I can feel what you are decribing.
A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Not my favorite, but it was still incredible!

antigonelives chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Not a bad poem at all, if a bit trite. Then again, I probably think it's trite because I've never been in love and can't relate, so don't take that as an insult.'

You could really go far with this, but it feels like you're only skimming the water, so to speak - try plunging into the depths, if you will. Try imagery, description, different forms and words to show us what you see, think, feel, and know.

Overall, not bad, and the first line is awesome.