Reviews for The Ebony Star
Tatiana Eleyna chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Wow. You have a real gift for poetry.
Gee - Girl chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I like this poem, it is very spiritual and overcoming. However i felt that it needed a soft ending, perhaps another line...

Watching... Knowing...
reiphil chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
Great poem. It makes the narrator seem either a pillar of support or something that is every memory or moment mixed in one. I still haven't decided yet. It's like every emotion that bundles within us at any time.

Good stuff :)