Reviews for The Road to Virlinshar
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 10 . 6/17/2009
Huh... you know, now that I think about it, how does Marin know what color eyes she has? If she can't remember anything, and she's blind, how would she know her eyes are "dull unblinking gray" or however you said it? I'm going to assume you did that on purpose ... Marin just gets more and more mysterious!

Ugh, you haven't updated in forever so I can assume you won't any time soon... But, please? The suspense is killing me. I must have more!
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 9 . 6/17/2009
Well, that answers my question about the Namer... sort of. I'm still curious about him/her.

Poor Marin. Sounds like something's really tormenting her. What is it?
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 8 . 6/17/2009
Holy crap! Plot twist? This gets better and better; I love Marin more with every chapter!
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 7 . 6/17/2009
Whoa! Who is the Namer? Is he the person that rules the Guardians? Is he God?

And I kinda expected Adin to be in love with Ulja.. I mean, seriously. :P But, he handled it kind of immaturely. I think it was a petty, desperate kind of "in love". He's falling for Marin, I think; and it'll be a much more mature love, the kind that a man, not a boy, has for a woman! :D
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 6 . 6/17/2009
No! Ulja can't leave! She was so sweet and good... poor Adin... speaking of which, I think he likes Marin. But doesn't know it yet. :]
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 5 . 6/17/2009
Oh, what's going to happen next? So suspensful! Cool names, Byouu and Xinabi and stuff, for the towns.
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 4 . 6/17/2009
Wow! Marin is just full of surprises. I must say you've got me hooked...
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 3 . 6/17/2009
Even though he's a real pussy, I like Adin. His mom sounds like a loser.
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
Not all blind people have gray eyes. I like how you gave Maren gray eyes though. She seems intriguing.
Sweet Lady Genevieve chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Good beginning. I like Ulja.
Carmel March chapter 10 . 6/21/2008
Even though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work!

Carm
Twilight Starr chapter 10 . 6/13/2008
Great job at painting a picture. Nice twist at the end. Nice work.

Have a fantastic day and an amazing summer.

Twilight Starr
Carmel March chapter 9 . 3/10/2008
Absolutely wonderful. I love every bit of this story :)

Keep up the fantastic work!

Carm
Sixth chapter 9 . 2/26/2008
It's a great chapter!

I just realized something though, that you tend to write in an informal manner... there's a word for that, but I can't recall x_x Well usually, when you write a story, that's best to be avoided. Just pointing it out

Sixth
Twilight Starr chapter 9 . 2/26/2008
Interesting. Have a lovely day.

Twilight Starr
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