|Reviews for Untouchable Now|
| Fading Memories chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
I loved this poem. Something about it... I don't know, I can't really relate to it, but it's like, well it's hard to explain. Kinda like I wish a friend would've written it to me. It's amazing!
| Haley chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
its too bad that you dont kno this guy...he's really important to me...if you knew the situation you'd kno why i act the way i do...thanks for caring bout me but i dont need anyone to save me from myself...im not stupid an nothins gonna happen to me. jus thought you might wanna kno that...
| ButterflyTears chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
I really like this poem! It resonates with experiences I've had with friends, and it sucka because there's nothign you can do but be there when it all goes tits up.
| R. Sharmayne chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
So much soul in this piece.
| Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
... Wow... When I read this, I'm reminded that sometimes, we are truly helpless.
Great job. :)
| Nonya Soum chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Beautiful. I can just feel the real emotions coming out and how you really have something to say to someone. It's sad, but still beautiful. I really liked it. I can't even pick a single line that I liked best of all because it flows together so well. Great job!
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Sad... I hope things work out. Great job.
| EmilyAlice10 chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
that's really good. You sound like a great friend. Really good poem, i like it a lot. Keep writing!
| killer syntax chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Aww what a sad poem-but nicely done! I enjoyed it, it really made me feel your emotion, it was just superb. Nice job!