Reviews for Fruitless
Basara chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
wow... emocative...

sunscraped chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
how true that is.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Wow. I love this. Its so beautiful, yet so heartbreaking. You've said everything you need to say, and something so powerful, in so few words. Nicely done!
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Such a coming of age lesson. Very sad, but also very realistic. Amazing haiku.

Next Exit chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
so disappointing... the feeling of the poem, not the poem itself. you did a wonderful job. :P