|Reviews for Bathroom Graffiti|
| T.B. Cross chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
| Rachizzle chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Vomit.. HM... .. ... MGMKHKLAJDKLA! _ lol
Good poem, I liked it.
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Wow. I really like this piece. Everything is worded so well and the imagery is really clear. I can see the scenes and the graffiti on the walls. Such a sad piece, but you worded it so gracefully. My only suggestion is this: When you said: "Unheard cries of help still spiral
across tiles and closed doors.
Pleads for love and help"
instead of saying "help" twice, I'd suggest using it only once and putting a different word in there. Other than that, I think you did an excellent job!
| killer syntax chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Wow, what a creative edge to an otherwise undesireable subject. Very enjoyable, and very interesting. Nice job!