|Reviews for answering machine|
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
I really like this. It was great. )
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| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
I like this.. the title is great with the ending... and i love hte part about vaporizing.. awesome piece
| this is britt chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
the desperation and stark beauty of this kill me.
| born blue chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
this is one of my favorites of yours. its the best thing i have read in a while. im listening to the song right now, and its beautiful. i love the diction and imagery here. gorgeous.
| she smolders chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
You describe you many so many different things in such a vivid way. I can even begin to say how much I love this. It's complex and yet the emotions shine through simply. Take care.
| Crossing the Rubicon chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Wow. I love this. My favorite lines: "and i’d like to hear the gasp of oxygen
that rushes blindly from your lungs before
you say my name.
say it loudly, say it proudly."
| thestonedfox chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
The imagery in this was just... mind-blowing. Great job!
| temerity chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Stunning, and I mean it. Congrats for being one of the actual poets on the site! You have a real talent for wordplay.
Always write on!