Reviews for define: Series
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 3 . 8/4/2007
Haha, this is cute. I like how you associate lateness with how you look. Very cute. Keep writing! :)
SirScott chapter 15 . 7/31/2007
Is that a good feeling or a bad one?

SirScott
WyrdWolf chapter 15 . 7/30/2007
Concise and wonderful. Glad to see more of these define: haiku (senryu)!

Wolfie
sarah1491 chapter 13 . 6/9/2007
ahah, i like this one :) peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. :)
sarah1491 chapter 3 . 5/21/2007
it's amazing how you can make a haiku so descriptive
SirScott chapter 14 . 5/10/2007
I always say that beauty is skin deep, but ugly is to the bone.

SirScott
WyrdWolf chapter 14 . 5/10/2007
Yipe! Graphic. Powerful in that way, though. This one is a strong haik-senryu.

Wolfie
Elliptical Shapes chapter 4 . 5/10/2007
Nothing to do with your heart. More of a pants-area thing.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 3 . 5/10/2007
Spelt bulge wrong
Elliptical Shapes chapter 2 . 5/10/2007
crack?
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Excellent spew about dimension 4.

Yay Baxter. The time bender.

Alan/gelina
SirScott chapter 13 . 5/8/2007
peanut and jelly is a classic lunch. I hope you remember to eat your apple.

SirScott
SirScott chapter 9 . 5/8/2007
Criticism makes us grow. Well, at least, that's what my old man says.

SirScott
Niels Stegeman chapter 6 . 5/8/2007
I have not read them all, but I think it's a nice little collection of peculiar and beautiful haiku's. I most enjoyed the Water-trilogy. Truly wonderful work and I commend you.

And of course thank you for the constant reviews!
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 2 . 5/7/2007
Aww, sad, do you not like slam poetry? Because I love it. It's one of my favorite forms of poetry. Completely free verse and completely stream-of-consciousness. But to each their own. I like the little tweak you did here. Nice. Keep writing! :)
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