Reviews for define: Series
WyrdWolf chapter 7 . 5/6/2007
Yech. Sounds a little bit like me right now-just got back from a 6 and a half hour combination of 18 holes of golf and heavy yard work. _

Wolfie
WyrdWolf chapter 6 . 5/6/2007
I like the title of the first of this little trilogy, and the entirety of the last haiku. Has a...yep! Good finish.

Wolfie
WyrdWolf chapter 5 . 5/6/2007
I think cliches are more effective when introduce in poetry.

Yeah.

Wolfie
WyrdWolf chapter 4 . 5/6/2007
Mm. This one is good...impacting, I think, is a good word for this.

Wolfie
WyrdWolf chapter 3 . 5/6/2007
This one got a smirk out of me. You have nice finishes for these.

Wolfie
WyrdWolf chapter 2 . 5/6/2007
Ha! Fantastic finisher on this one, love!

Wolfie
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
I very much love this whole idea. And you're lucky, getting to take CW before junior year. Where I'm stuck doing yard work...

Wolfie
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Mmhmm, I so know that feeling. Creative writing class was always the class that went by the fastest for me, too. And because I like to be nitpicky: I would attempt a stronger verb or set of verbs for this, simply because it is so short. You need to choose the most impactful words in a poem this length. But I so know the feeling. Keep writing! :)
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