Aw, you beat up on yourself too much. I liked this poem a lot. I especially enjoyed the symbolism and the dark tones it took. It held a rich flow for me, and it kept me intrigued.\

I see your posting a lot of stuff here. Thats usually how poetry/lyrics works. Just flashes of inspiration and you have a masterpiece pouring from your head onto paper, and then onto this, where it can be read by all.

As I pretty much leave off at every time, I'm enthusiastic to read more poems from you, and this has assisted to fuel the anticipation. Bye for now.