Reviews for RIP
non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
It's all in the mind. Whatever you let out will be used against you. It'll be twisted and turned, muddled and blurred- unseen to the eyes.

Nice poem poet :)
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Good, you should never let anyone tear away your dreams from you. I loved the images you created in this one. Wonderful job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Great idea for a poem. I liked the way you ended it. Great job.