Reviews for Whiteout
Basara chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
just a facade... an obivious facade...

nice...
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
This haiku has a real sad, desprate feel to it. It's almost pleading. Very well written, gets the point across effortlessly.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Uhg, I know how you feel. I love this, especially how you used an everday item to express something we all feel uniquely. Great job.
Simultaneous Tick-Tocks chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
I guess it only works if the thing in question is white to begin with. I remember my stepbrother getting in trouble for engraving cuss words into the wood furniture. I caught him and he tried to erase it with whiteout... xD

tick-tock
guess who's back babies chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Interesting...haikus are hard to do so i won't even attempt one.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
What do I say about this... "Another great haiku"? but I've already said that... Hmm...

Another great haiku.