Reviews for Take Me
JoJo619 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Wow! That was really good. Haunting.

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Ecomsay chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
i love it i can total relate
gnomesbeatfaeries chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Error wise all you I's are lower case and your I'll's look like ill's, but poem wise I really liked it. At first, the repetition got in the way and threw me off, but as I read more, it worked. Maybe i'm being brainwashed...

michelle
tesa131313 chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
1. where you had a -

you could have put a comma

2. If this was a techno song...

3. cool
bR0k3N chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
I won't point out any errors! I liked this. you're right, I couldn't quite catch the flow but it still was good! i still liked the words!

Nice! ]
braindead1345 chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
its pretty good. and i think of it as having a rok-pop-ish kinda

beat...