|Reviews for Beautiful Dawn|
| Double AA chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I like the simpleness to it, and the nice flow. Is the hidden meaning, that life goes on but it's stil beutiful, or something like that.
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
this had a great flow to it, and i rather enjoyed it. can you please indulge me to this 'hidden meaning'?
| Luny Loona chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Hey, is this something like...about hope, or waiting for the good times to come eventually? It reminds me of mine, which sounds strange, but yeah...
I'm fine. Nice poem :D
| Beloved Truth chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
This wonderful, and I am going to add it to my C2!
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
I liked this, though not quite as much as the other piece of yours I read. My only suggestion is maybe instead of saying "sky" or "dawn" so much that you might want to use a different word to make the poem come to life a little bit more. Overall, I think you did a really nice job. Thanks so much for the reviews, by the way. I really appreciate them!