| Reviews for Beautiful Dawn |
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   Double AA chapter 1 . 5/9/2008 I like the simpleness to it, and the nice flow. Is the hidden meaning, that life goes on but it's stil beutiful, or something like that. Keep Writing! Double AA |
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008 this had a great flow to it, and i rather enjoyed it. can you please indulge me to this 'hidden meaning'? |
| Luny Loona chapter 1 . 6/21/2007 Hey, is this something like...about hope, or waiting for the good times to come eventually? It reminds me of mine, which sounds strange, but yeah... I'm fine. Nice poem :D |
| radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 5/10/2007 This wonderful, and I am going to add it to my C2! *TSP |
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 5/8/2007 I liked this, though not quite as much as the other piece of yours I read. My only suggestion is maybe instead of saying "sky" or "dawn" so much that you might want to use a different word to make the poem come to life a little bit more. Overall, I think you did a really nice job. Thanks so much for the reviews, by the way. I really appreciate them! |