Reviews for on the verge
i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
The last line kills me. I love the idea of the poem- the moon in pain whenever a kite falls. And the desire to have someone care if you fell too. It's beautiful.

By the way, thanks for the review. It meant a lot to me, especially for that poem.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
A very interesting poem. I loved the ending. Great job.
sunscraped chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
The comparison is something I'd have never come up with. It's pretty original, and that's very pleasing to see.