|Reviews for Supernova Sabotage|
| t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
"ignite the match and bury the ash
kill the beauty, nothing can last"
I really love those lines, thank you for the comment and thanks for the compliment on my penname. It is all much appreciated.
I think this will be really good once you're finished. :]
| TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
I can tell that this is a work in progress. First off, I'm getting the impression that this is more of a pretty-descriptions poem rather than a deep, emotional one. So far it's interesting, but I think you should have another verse between the first one and the chorus. It will make it feel more complete. I really like the flow in this (good for songs), and I'm curious to see what else you do with this. I can imagine music to this, so that's good. I think now you just need to figure out what it is you want to say, and say it. You've got a good start, and this has potential to be really good. I'm looking forward to seeing what you add to this (because like this it's VERY incomplete).