Reviews for i can't take it
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
Wow.

Did you ever end up telling her?

Amazing Poem.

Would it be too crazy of me to say that I think you'd be one to

have the talent to be able to write one kick ass novel-in-verse?

Your poetry just tells its story so effortlessly,

I couldn't help but suggest the idea.
Lost In Context chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
sad, but impactful. The "nothing./ just complaining about dinner" lines break my heart. The forty days bit is confusing- what happens in forty more days? Overall though, it's heartbreaking but very good.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Wow, how sad. I like the emphesizing of forty days, forty days. It makes it urgent and worried, all mixed together. Powerful message, it ends sadly but I like to hope there is a happy ending afterwards...
kshields chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
I LOVE this poem/story! I am bi and I haven't told anyone but my friends so this really says a lot...
in a jar pk chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
aw sweetie.

i got your email before i read this and i'm like, 'oh.'

i love this, though. xx
wizard-mind-bomb chapter 1 . 5/7/2007
If this is a song well...I'm going to be blunt. I out right stinks. If this is a story well it has no potential. Here is some help if this is a story. Slowly describe the main character as you progress the first chapter