|Reviews for Forgotten|
| iwishillwilluponyou chapter 23 . 6/8/2007
gahh there's a cliffhanger every single time ;_; it drives me crazy! this is a wonderful story
| readingismything chapter 22 . 6/4/2007
i like the plot..and the way you write...i am totally hooked to your story...its infuriating that dani is still thinking abt brad..wanna knw what's happenin with her? and what will happ. now?...update soon!
| Addie W chapter 22 . 6/3/2007
Wow... more problems. Poor Dani! Life just isn't fair to her, is it?
| squiggle-line chapter 21 . 6/2/2007
Uh...not to be mean or anything but I still don't buy any of it. I understand that this is an illegal project and regular procedures do not apply...but I don't think that automatically means whatever happens is realisitic. Bradley is turning out to be really creepy...I don't really understand why Danielle feels conflicted either.
| Randall K chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
| iwishillwilluponyou chapter 21 . 5/31/2007
what! she can't have feelings for brad .
| vio923 chapter 20 . 5/29/2007
You love cliffhangers!
Regardless of how she may or may not feel about Brad, he broke the law. Kidnapping is a federal offense and she does not have the option of saying that she doesn't want to press charges against him - it is out of her hands.
Having said that, since she does have "feelings" for Brad she will be reluctant to say anything to "hurt" me. I feel bad for her. She has to tell the truth - otherwise she can be charged with perjury.
She also has to decide what she wants to do about Brad and Nathan. Brad will probably have to spend some time in jail but then... anything in possible after that. If she truly does not "love" Nathan she needs to end - the longer she postpones that, the more that Nathan will be hurt and be angry.
Hope you post more soon!
| iwishillwilluponyou chapter 18 . 5/26/2007
ah! every single time there's a cliffhanger ;_;
| vio923 chapter 17 . 5/22/2007
They are somewhat naive. Before in the hotel room and now - they should get help - FBI - someone - even her "father" didn't want to mess with the law and let her go.
| iwishillwilluponyou chapter 17 . 5/21/2007
ergh cant anything ever go right for dani and nathan .
| Lady R chapter 16 . 5/21/2007
This review is actually for the last three chapters. Wow! To think that I was feeling sorry for the Marc character...anyway, I think the pov that you are writing is fine, and I don't think you have to go in depth about the experiment, but that's just my opinion.
| vio923 chapter 15 . 5/20/2007
At first I felt sorry for Marc/Brad - now it seems that he is the worst of the bunch!
| Addie W chapter 15 . 5/20/2007
Oh, that evil, evil man. He needs to be the one out of the picture for good.
Update again soon, please!
| iwishillwilluponyou chapter 15 . 5/20/2007
ahh! i thought that was going to be the ending! lol
| guess who's back babies chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
You missed some puncuation but no one's perfect. also when you the narrator calls her Gabriella and then he calls her Gabby confused me for a little bit. I don't know if that happened to other people but I wanted to tell you.
So uhh...what's gonna happen? XD Is she being poisoned or used for something? Are her memories fake?