gahh there's a cliffhanger every single time ;_; it drives me crazy! this is a wonderful story

i like the plot..and the way you write...i am totally hooked to your story...its infuriating that dani is still thinking abt brad..wanna knw what's happenin with her? and what will happ. now?...update soon!

Wow... more problems. Poor Dani! Life just isn't fair to her, is it?

Uh...not to be mean or anything but I still don't buy any of it. I understand that this is an illegal project and regular procedures do not apply...but I don't think that automatically means whatever happens is realisitic. Bradley is turning out to be really creepy...I don't really understand why Danielle feels conflicted either.

great! update?

what! she can't have feelings for brad .

You love cliffhangers!

Regardless of how she may or may not feel about Brad, he broke the law. Kidnapping is a federal offense and she does not have the option of saying that she doesn't want to press charges against him - it is out of her hands.

Having said that, since she does have "feelings" for Brad she will be reluctant to say anything to "hurt" me. I feel bad for her. She has to tell the truth - otherwise she can be charged with perjury.

She also has to decide what she wants to do about Brad and Nathan. Brad will probably have to spend some time in jail but then... anything in possible after that. If she truly does not "love" Nathan she needs to end - the longer she postpones that, the more that Nathan will be hurt and be angry.

Hope you post more soon!

ah! every single time there's a cliffhanger ;_;

They are somewhat naive. Before in the hotel room and now - they should get help - FBI - someone - even her "father" didn't want to mess with the law and let her go.

ergh cant anything ever go right for dani and nathan .

This review is actually for the last three chapters. Wow! To think that I was feeling sorry for the Marc character...anyway, I think the pov that you are writing is fine, and I don't think you have to go in depth about the experiment, but that's just my opinion.

At first I felt sorry for Marc/Brad - now it seems that he is the worst of the bunch!

Oh, that evil, evil man. He needs to be the one out of the picture for good.

Update again soon, please!

Addie

ahh! i thought that was going to be the ending! lol

You missed some puncuation but no one's perfect. also when you the narrator calls her Gabriella and then he calls her Gabby confused me for a little bit. I don't know if that happened to other people but I wanted to tell you.

So uhh...what's gonna happen? XD Is she being poisoned or used for something? Are her memories fake?