Reviews for Pretend and Fail
tearing hands chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
Good poem. I really love the ending, those last three lines. I can relate.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
You express emotion so well, whereas others (such as myself) only end up sounding clichéically angsty... kudos. Good work again.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
A lot of resentment and anger in this piece. It is full of emotions and feeling. Great job.