Reviews for Betrayal
Luna's Child chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Wow, this was a powerful poem. Shows just how thin the line of trust really is. I've had quite a few so called "friends" betray me. I haven't talked to them since. Good riddance I say! Though I understand that it can be hard for some because of all the times and memories they share.
The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
I didn't think it was confusing at all. Very well played out.

Keep writing, dear.

Ramen
postcards from italy chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
depressing... but very well-written
Anjel Kitty chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Lord, I know how that feels. One of my best friends in elemaentary betrayed me, and I left the school because of it. I later meet a friend who was one of the trio that her, the friend that bretrayed me, and I was, whe said that she was sorry about what had happened and that she wanted to be friends again. She also said that after I left her and the other girl stopped being frineds because of what the girl had done to me. I am now friends with the girl(not the one that betrayed me) and happy about it because I knew that it wasn't her fault that the girl did what she did. Love the poem.
CrystallineEyes chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
Hey...

That's hurts.

_

I love your job.

So deep.

Keep it up.
A Sweet Escape chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
It's so deep and so intense, but in an AMAZING way! I love how you have the power to write like that!