Reviews for Teddy Bear
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Really adorable. So so sweet and so heart braking!
Devin-Jamie chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
I read this, and was like "eh" because it just seemed too short or something. then i did a kind of double take, and was like "wait, woah. i really, really like this."

and i really do.

good job ]
just dani chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
i like this a lot.

it kinda reminds me of something i wrote-"porcelain doll"...check it out? :D
daughteroftherain chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
this is one of my favourites, it really
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
this poem beautifully describes the pain of growing up and leaving what we love behind- well done!
Basara chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
sad...

nice...
dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
aw almost made me cry! its to cute! I love this haiku.

-plz review back :)

Dreamforever101
Jason Daniels chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
stupendious