Reviews for Under water
Toxik Purity chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Very nice. The poem's length (or lack of) contributes to the idea of 'short and sweet', or in this case, 'short and refreshing'. I really like the last two lines, they end the poem well.
curiouzkatt chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
short but effective. I like it. )
Definition chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
Very pretty - the last line is perfect. Once again, nice choice of words; your description is vivid and brilliant.
RuathaWehrling chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
A short poem, but a good one. I don't have any real comments to make, but nice work!

radioactive stanica chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Beautiful! I am adding this to my C2!

Best Wishes!

The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
I liked the rhyming in this poem! Also, the picture you gave me with the words you chose was really clear! I liked that it was so short and simple! Great job!

The Reverse Edge Blade