Reviews for Show Me
KiLL mE s0 i DnT g0TTa chapter 1 . 5/15/2007
i feel ya, been there feel that A LOT. i wish i could read more now...but i gotta do hw...bleh...
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
I really like this. You portrayed your anger and hurt really well. Your rhyming didn't seemed forced, and this piece flowed nicely. Great job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
Emotion well conveyed. Well written. Good work.
InViSiBlE wOmAn chapter 1 . 5/9/2007
I can really relate to this poem, just one of those days where everything seems to be going out of their way to get you for no reason. good on you :)