|Reviews for With Intent|
| Key chapter 1 . 11/23/2022
Wow...just wow! This sorry has had me in a chockehold! I...it's that dang good!
| Angelic Phantomcrow chapter 21 . 2/15/2020
Dark hair, skinny but not yet unhealthily so, tall but not too tall, pale hazel eyes going green? Or maybe ginger...Faded colour clothing?
Chomp chomp, I just reread this and it’s still good
Also the question how I imagine the character...that above but sequel maybe will see how accurate...
| Evi chapter 21 . 1/30/2019
WOW! This is an amazing story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing! Youve made my day!
| purecarnation chapter 8 . 11/30/2018
Adam has warm, brownish hair that shines with an undertone of red in the sunlight. Maybe a slight dusting of freckles across his nose and cheekbones?
btw, love the plot and the writing, you're amazing ! :3
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/28/2017
Absolutely amazing story. Excellent. Xoxo Robin
| addictionxo chapter 21 . 6/18/2017
That ...was awesome. Definitely kept me entertained. 5 stars!
| thoughshaltnotkill chapter 10 . 10/2/2016
I really want to continue reading this story but I just can't grasp Adam's mind. It's so chaotic; and not in a chaotic way that makes sense, as in, in a chaotic way that is interpreted as chaotic. I love the idea behind this, I really do, but I'm just confused and I can't follow what's going on. Regardless, I believe this is a great story, maybe not just personally suited to my taste. Thank you.
| Ibbit chapter 21 . 2/6/2016
The ending was hella cute. But Jesus Christ did this story make me sympathetically nervous for Adam. I had nerves I've never had before. I love reading well written fictions with characters that have disorders. You did such a good job with this. I love it so much. There was more depth in the characters actions than I expected and you could visibly see their thought processes unfolding.
I could see Adam waking up from the hospital and no being able to see the intentions anymore and as good as that would be for him, the thought made me sad. We would have lost our fictional nervous little superhero. But it wasn't addressed, so I can still pretend to be sad that he's still a nervous wreck.
This was amazing and detailed. There were actual side characters with opinions and character traits and main characters with more than two original thoughts. It was a breath of fresh air and I'm glad :)
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/14/2016
Absolutely phenomenal story. I loved Adam's ability: sometimes useful, often sickening, and always unwelcome. I know the ship has sailed on these 2 for a series, but I'd still love to read more about theses guys.
| Encore19 chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
Interesting! I like how your explored your MC's OCD.
| Florence chapter 21 . 6/27/2015
Have you considered publishing? Your writing is comparable to works published by small presses/publishers - as well as mainstream e-publishers.
| BelieveIt chapter 21 . 5/24/2015
I just have to review this, I adore this story, I think I must have re read it at least a half a dozen times, perfect ending but I still want more :P
But in all honesty. Perfect, one of my all time favourite stories :)
| TunglMed chapter 21 . 5/12/2015
Loved this story! And may have to hold you responsible for lack of sleep over too much reading ;) I'm glad Amy was ok too!
| chocovic-chu chapter 21 . 4/6/2015
I love it! This is unusual romance story for me but heck it's also refreshing! Adam's surprisingly so adorable even though I read him as a freak (haha). But I'm glad he got the man he loved!
Thanks for sharing! The ending was endearing!
| Guest chapter 21 . 2/23/2015
This is absolutely fantastic! It's more than the slash, somethIng that's hard to say to many stories out there. I love the plot, the little twist at the end, and the way it ended. It doesn't try to give the perfect ending to the characters, who are, by the way, beautiful with all their flaws. You made my day. Thanks for writing this! - VictorianLegend