This was beautiful. Insane, rambling, absolutely in-character, and beautiful all the same.

Wow...just wow! This sorry has had me in a chockehold! I...it's that dang good!

Dark hair, skinny but not yet unhealthily so, tall but not too tall, pale hazel eyes going green? Or maybe ginger...Faded colour clothing?

Chomp chomp, I just reread this and it’s still good
Also the question how I imagine the character...that above but sequel maybe will see how accurate...

WOW! This is an amazing story! Thank you so much for writing and sharing! Youve made my day!
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Adam has warm, brownish hair that shines with an undertone of red in the sunlight. Maybe a slight dusting of freckles across his nose and cheekbones?

btw, love the plot and the writing, you're amazing ! :3

Absolutely amazing story. Excellent. Xoxo Robin

That ...was awesome. Definitely kept me entertained. 5 stars!

I really want to continue reading this story but I just can't grasp Adam's mind. It's so chaotic; and not in a chaotic way that makes sense, as in, in a chaotic way that is interpreted as chaotic. I love the idea behind this, I really do, but I'm just confused and I can't follow what's going on. Regardless, I believe this is a great story, maybe not just personally suited to my taste. Thank you.

The ending was hella cute. But Jesus Christ did this story make me sympathetically nervous for Adam. I had nerves I've never had before. I love reading well written fictions with characters that have disorders. You did such a good job with this. I love it so much. There was more depth in the characters actions than I expected and you could visibly see their thought processes unfolding.
I could see Adam waking up from the hospital and no being able to see the intentions anymore and as good as that would be for him, the thought made me sad. We would have lost our fictional nervous little superhero. But it wasn't addressed, so I can still pretend to be sad that he's still a nervous wreck.
This was amazing and detailed. There were actual side characters with opinions and character traits and main characters with more than two original thoughts. It was a breath of fresh air and I'm glad :)
~ibbit

Absolutely phenomenal story. I loved Adam's ability: sometimes useful, often sickening, and always unwelcome. I know the ship has sailed on these 2 for a series, but I'd still love to read more about theses guys.

Interesting! I like how your explored your MC's OCD.

Have you considered publishing? Your writing is comparable to works published by small presses/publishers - as well as mainstream e-publishers.

I just have to review this, I adore this story, I think I must have re read it at least a half a dozen times, perfect ending but I still want more :P

But in all honesty. Perfect, one of my all time favourite stories :)

Loved this story! And may have to hold you responsible for lack of sleep over too much reading ;) I'm glad Amy was ok too!

I love it! This is unusual romance story for me but heck it's also refreshing! Adam's surprisingly so adorable even though I read him as a freak (haha). But I'm glad he got the man he loved!
Thanks for sharing! The ending was endearing!