This is absolutely fantastic! It's more than the slash, somethIng that's hard to say to many stories out there. I love the plot, the little twist at the end, and the way it ended. It doesn't try to give the perfect ending to the characters, who are, by the way, beautiful with all their flaws. You made my day. Thanks for writing this! - VictorianLegend

Ok, I logged in... Is there gonna be anymore?

First, I'm too lazy to sign in... Second: that's it? THATS IT? WTF? WHY? It was just getting good!

Oh well this power is something I haven't seen before, I'm trying to imagine that it works much like Eagle vision in Assassin's creed.

I'm not crying... YOU'RE crying..

I know it's been a while since you've updated stories or posted anything on this site, but I wanted to review, in case you're still keeping up on those. I read this one and Cold Turkey, and I must say I was very impressed by your talent! The slow development, the crippling, self-caused problems of your main characters, the lacing of humor and tension, are all woven together beautifully. The way the two protagonists of these stories self-sabotage by assuming they know what their love interest is like is wonderfully frustrating. And I love how you ended both with no consummation or huge declarations of love, just a trailing off with a bit of hope for the future, was different and well done. Since you're not active on fp any longer, I do hope you kept writing, and I'd love to know if you've got any other slash out there. Thanks for keeping these posted here, it's appreciated!

I read this story twice (once a few years ago) and again not too long ago, and I swear both times i got caught off guard. The story manages to go the complete different direction I expected. I thought it'd be a kind of funny account of a guy who sees dead people, but boy was I wrong. So wrong. It was sweet, actually kind of realistic, and thankfully didn't turn into a cliche coffee shop story (which i should've figured it wouldn't since it was written before that craze.)
Despite being kind of seriously, it still had it's funny moments without being jarring. I loved it.
Kudos.

That was amazing... I loved it very much. Now I'm just trying to decide which fictional God I like better the one sitting on a cloud drinking lemonade or the one throwing peanuts . Either way I don't think it matters the both laugh at the humans expense.

Joe is a fucking ass. And I will be so angry when he's his love interest.

I LOVE this story-! What I loved most is how you seemed to be completely inside Adam's head throughout the entire story, it was well put together-! :7

You didn't give character descriptions, really you don't seem to describe a lot, your writing is all in the action of the characters and their emotions-!

Though different from what I'm use to seeing, I think it works well with this story-!

My only issues with the story was Amy, she didn't seem childish; and after being with a pedophile for as long as she was you know she has to have some ... issues now-! That and Joe seemed to get over the whole 'it's not him' but suddenly 'it is him' thing way to easily-!

I think with some work this can be a great story -I differently want some more Joe & Adam bits- but as is I'd rate this a 9/10 because I enjoyed it so much-!

This story has a lot of things going for it, and from my standpoint, with some corrections it would easily be one of the best slash fictions I've read-!

I really hope to read more on it-! ;7

-RPS

Well, he's short and lanky and has really wild black hair and green eyes (even though I'm pretty sure you mentioned their color, but I forgot) and his face twitches a lot. I like him.

I read this story ages ago, so long ago in fact that it took me several chapters to even remember that I had already read it. All I remembered was that...well, to avoid spoilers, let's just say that all I remembered was that little twist in the garden the second time. Just wanted you to know that I loved it as much in this read through as I did the first time. I'm definitely going to be looking to see what else you've written. Thanks for sharing.
Miranda

I know it's only chapter 2, but I can already tell this story's going to be amazing. And there are still 19 chapters left! XD
I love this fic

I read this story a few years ago, and it popped into my mind again recently. I'm glad I was able to find it! Wonderfully written, with unique and multidimensional characters and good pacing. Loved how you wrote Joe especially.

Cheers!

I love this!