|Reviews for With Intent|
| Madgirl126 chapter 21 . 1/19/2015
Ok, I logged in... Is there gonna be anymore?
| Madgirl126 chapter 21 . 1/19/2015
First, I'm too lazy to sign in... Second: that's it? THATS IT? WTF? WHY? It was just getting good!
| Magi Aladdin chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
Oh well this power is something I haven't seen before, I'm trying to imagine that it works much like Eagle vision in Assassin's creed.
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/25/2014
I'm not crying... YOU'RE crying..
| MizuAz chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
I know it's been a while since you've updated stories or posted anything on this site, but I wanted to review, in case you're still keeping up on those. I read this one and Cold Turkey, and I must say I was very impressed by your talent! The slow development, the crippling, self-caused problems of your main characters, the lacing of humor and tension, are all woven together beautifully. The way the two protagonists of these stories self-sabotage by assuming they know what their love interest is like is wonderfully frustrating. And I love how you ended both with no consummation or huge declarations of love, just a trailing off with a bit of hope for the future, was different and well done. Since you're not active on fp any longer, I do hope you kept writing, and I'd love to know if you've got any other slash out there. Thanks for keeping these posted here, it's appreciated!
| sentimental. semi-mental chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
I read this story twice (once a few years ago) and again not too long ago, and I swear both times i got caught off guard. The story manages to go the complete different direction I expected. I thought it'd be a kind of funny account of a guy who sees dead people, but boy was I wrong. So wrong. It was sweet, actually kind of realistic, and thankfully didn't turn into a cliche coffee shop story (which i should've figured it wouldn't since it was written before that craze.)
Despite being kind of seriously, it still had it's funny moments without being jarring. I loved it.
| ajashire1 chapter 21 . 6/8/2014
That was amazing... I loved it very much. Now I'm just trying to decide which fictional God I like better the one sitting on a cloud drinking lemonade or the one throwing peanuts . Either way I don't think it matters the both laugh at the humans expense.
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
Joe is a fucking ass. And I will be so angry when he's his love interest.
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 21 . 4/18/2014
I LOVE this story-! What I loved most is how you seemed to be completely inside Adam's head throughout the entire story, it was well put together-! :7
You didn't give character descriptions, really you don't seem to describe a lot, your writing is all in the action of the characters and their emotions-!
Though different from what I'm use to seeing, I think it works well with this story-!
My only issues with the story was Amy, she didn't seem childish; and after being with a pedophile for as long as she was you know she has to have some ... issues now-! That and Joe seemed to get over the whole 'it's not him' but suddenly 'it is him' thing way to easily-!
I think with some work this can be a great story -I differently want some more Joe & Adam bits- but as is I'd rate this a 9/10 because I enjoyed it so much-!
This story has a lot of things going for it, and from my standpoint, with some corrections it would easily be one of the best slash fictions I've read-!
I really hope to read more on it-! ;7
| ArthurAlbionKirkland chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
Well, he's short and lanky and has really wild black hair and green eyes (even though I'm pretty sure you mentioned their color, but I forgot) and his face twitches a lot. I like him.
| MiranDuranDa chapter 21 . 2/12/2014
I read this story ages ago, so long ago in fact that it took me several chapters to even remember that I had already read it. All I remembered was that...well, to avoid spoilers, let's just say that all I remembered was that little twist in the garden the second time. Just wanted you to know that I loved it as much in this read through as I did the first time. I'm definitely going to be looking to see what else you've written. Thanks for sharing.
| Exasperation102 chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
I know it's only chapter 2, but I can already tell this story's going to be amazing. And there are still 19 chapters left! XD
I love this fic
| Paul chapter 21 . 1/4/2014
I read this story a few years ago, and it popped into my mind again recently. I'm glad I was able to find it! Wonderfully written, with unique and multidimensional characters and good pacing. Loved how you wrote Joe especially.
| MileyRowling chapter 21 . 1/2/2014
I love this!
| jjtzero chapter 21 . 12/9/2013
I don't know how I stumbled upon this story, but can I just say wow! I love your writing style and the gritty but comical nature of the characters here. I have yet to check but I seriously hope you did (or do) turn this into a series, I need to know what will happen next with Adam's abilities, and his peanut filled life. :D
Thanks for the brilliant read and I can't wait to get started on the the rest of your work!