|Reviews for With Intent|
| opelleam chapter 21 . 10/21/2013
really great and interesting plot
| Alexis chapter 8 . 10/18/2013
I'm loving this story so far! I wish I could write like you, Adam is quite the character, Neurotic and completely lovable, I picture him sorta like Kevin Zegers with shoulder length-ish hair. Zegers is very pretty and I believe I remember something about Adam saying he was average or a bit odd looking? I think? But I'm guessing he doesn't see himself clearly...hoping that Joe does though! On to the next Chapter!
| A.Collins chapter 21 . 10/2/2013
This may never even reach your eyes, but that's okay I suppose.
You have no idea how many times I've tried to start reading this story. I always put it down because during those times, my taste was a little immature. I liked Marty Stu's, or I liked emo boys, or only high school aged teens, or I didn't like older guys, certain disorders etc the list goes on.
I guess having grown up a lot, my tastes in literature have also matured. Thank God. Can you believe one of the major things that kept me from originally getting past the first couple chapters was not the ghostly pedophile, but the fact that Joe had greying hair? Though the ghostly pedo certainly had a role.
Anyways, what I'm trying to so eloquently say, is that I'm glad I finally got around to finishing this story. I'm also glad it took me this long, because I would not have enjoyed it as much as I would have back in 08 when I first stumbled upon it. I can't even explain how this story even made me feel, so I won't even try. Just know that it's going to leave a lasting impression on me.
I guess that's it. Thanks for the story, I'm going to come back and re read it in a couple months.
| Kilian Grey chapter 21 . 9/25/2013
Loved it all, so good!
| Kilian Grey chapter 17 . 9/25/2013
Strange and happy turn of events.
| Kilian Grey chapter 7 . 9/25/2013
I just love your humor, it's spot on.
| Kilian Grey chapter 6 . 9/25/2013
Mr. Nice guy?
| Kilian Grey chapter 4 . 9/25/2013
Crap, that's what you get for not staying a coward. Ugh.
| Kilian Grey chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
Too bad he can't feel at home while at home.
| Kilian Grey chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Wow, incredibly intricate and visual, loving this guy mania.
| The.Flailing chapter 21 . 9/15/2013
OMG I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! SO GOOD!
So well written! The style and the way you use the voice of the narrator to shape the way the story is told - SO SKILLFULLY MASTERFUL ITS SERIOUSLY LIKE MAKING ME HARD. I love it so much! Adam's character is so great! You've developed his personality so incredibly well! I love his neurotic impulses and the way in which he handles his abilities! I fell in love with him so easily, omg, you have no idea how much I love Adam!
And I love the power that you've given him! SO UNIQUE! So incredibly original! I love it! AND I LOVE WHAT YOU'VE DONE WITH IT! So many Supernatural stories are so our of this world, that it's so wonderful to find one that is so grounded in reality like yours is! The way Adam, though special, has integrated into our oh-so-familiar world, is fantastic! I love it so much! I love how the stakes in your story aren't overboard either! None of this 'saving the world' crap! It's all about the people, here; all about Adam and Joe and Joe's missing niece, and I love it. It makes everything more HUMAN and more emotional and more REAL and it gives me goosebumps just reading it!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING AND POSTING! This was seriously a joy, an honour, and a pleasure to read!
| Mcgde chapter 21 . 9/2/2013
Ahhh going to go stalk your page for a sequel now.
| HoodedCat chapter 21 . 7/18/2013
this is one of the best fiction works i've ever read O.o
please excuse me, i really would like to write something terrible witty and inspiring for you but this left me totally speechless...iam awefully sorry ... as it is i will visit your profil and read all the other works you published in hope that they might be as good as this one...though i've no doubt
| allancaldera chapter 21 . 6/30/2013
You know what? I always find your stories interesting specially the longer ones like this,Cold turkey and Technicolored something each of them are so different of what I usually read.I love how you portray your characters how you make Joe masculine but at the same time it have emotions and a gentle you make Adam that particular inteligent men like Sheldon but at the same time that it has its how could forget Basset it was hillarious I believe it was chapter 8 that I was laughing so hard as how you portray him and better you make him a gay dog I had never seen someone do for originality it was really amazing I would love if you continued with small sappy chaps but that may not be your style :Dlucks.
| GrangerDanger333 chapter 21 . 5/23/2013
I really love this story! Adam is such an amazing character, all his traits are well thought out and well written. I could probably say so much about all the good things in this story, including how damn cute Joe and Adam are. I love how Joe can get him to stop tapping and knows when he's counting and all that jazz. Sweet.
I would love to read more of these characters but I don't know if you're still writing :( Still, well bloody done on a super story! XD