Reviews for With Intent
1986 chapter 17 . 10/23/2007
Thx for the new chapter - I like it!
Liviania chapter 17 . 10/22/2007
Poor Adam. Haha, I love that Joe is developing an Adam-sense. It's good that he's a pretty steady guy and thus is absolutely freaked by Adam's Adam-ness. It's also good he knows Adam and Charlie are just friends.

Abstruse Blue chapter 17 . 10/22/2007
Yatta! Excellent. The plot thickens and it's getting good. *excited*
mandrake-o chapter 17 . 10/22/2007
Plants mean you have to water them.

And I love the last bit. “Cough like you mean it.” That's classic.

) Mandraco.

P.S. I must need to go to bed because I was about to sign as: ) Zebbie. But that's you, not me.
conclusivelead chapter 17 . 10/21/2007
Great new chapter. "Cough like you mean it." Ah, Joe. His witty banter is what gets me through the hard times. Seriously, though, I loved it. I anxiously await your updates; they're like a shot of adrenaline. Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, is there any way you would reconsider Joe's tight-lipped tendecy when it comes to his so-obvious attraction to Adam? It's excruciating. Wonderful, but excruciating.

DeletionImminent chapter 17 . 10/21/2007
Plants SO mean something. Plants mean alot. Thank god p

It's been a while though- for Amy. I'm interested to see what's been happening over in that plotline.

Anyhows. Awesome chapter. Nice confusionness. I liked _
Amerez chapter 17 . 10/21/2007
Oh, I think Adam's starting to get it. It was so sweet how protective Joe was. The whole chapter just made me go aw.
krista-pixie chapter 17 . 10/21/2007
horay an update! *dances* Joe and Adam are so confused together
Curb Crasher chapter 17 . 10/21/2007
I guess that's how you should take it. . . .

And I love this chapter! Because it made me feel better about the last chapter.
ranchan-akari chapter 17 . 10/21/2007
Aww~! Adam is so cute~! Joe was about to confess to him. I KNOW it! The last line was adorable. *huggles*
LandUnderWave chapter 17 . 10/21/2007
*pats author on back* Random is fine. Of course, this is coming from someone who just sits down and types whatever she thinks will get her to the next thing she's thought of and wants to stick in. (She is also worried that all her main characters are turning into different people every time she sits down at the keyboard. They're freaking difficult. This is not helped by the fact that her typical writing time now is 'after dinner and before sleep', caused by her father and brother finding where Myst IV went. And by her having to sew a kimono. This last is rather fun, but also irritating because it adds to the basic workload.) And Joe is showing up more, yay! *bounces* Oh, and I found another Adam to add to the list. He's in the book _Hot Target_ by Suzanne Brockmann. That book is the only book with slash romance which I can at all compare to your writing in terms other than "Nothing like as good". (I mean it. All the slashy books I've read so far, as well as most stories here on fictionpress, fall way, way short of your wonderful writing.) In my other news, I have progressed to the Butterfly Arc in 'Denizen'! I'm not too sure where it's going, but it's there now. *glances over* Oh, and my brother has just stolen my mouse to use on a different computer, which means I'm stuck with the icky one-click-only-and-hates-me mouse. Now, in non-egocentric news... I reread this chapter twice, and am probably going to read the whole story again. *applauds* Your writing is as wonderful as always. My sincere apologies for the overly long, not-spaced-out review. Thanks!

key of A major chapter 16 . 10/21/2007

i tell ya ive become hooked to this story, im like an addict i check everyday hoping for an update just itching to get a fix and theres nothing and i get so sad, :: sniff sniff:: anyway i know you have a life etc. etc. just wanted to let you know how awesome i think your story is and keep up the great work, you are totally deserving of a cookie (::)
DeletionImminent chapter 16 . 10/20/2007
oh my freaking god.

It took me so long to find this fic. It's amazing. I really hope you update it. I'm like, dying right now. See? You've killed me. Killed me dead.

As to the beginning of this chapter...

I can find nothing bad about it.

It fits very nicely with God's peantu throwing plan so far. As in, it's screwed up.

I hope Joe gets over himself at some point. For a cop he's not to good at taking the few steps between observation and... realisation? himslef.

I mean, Adam can;t harldy string two sentences together, he's OCD and he's pretty bad at social interaction.

So obviously Joe expects him to tell him al about himself and be perfectly comfortable with... yeah. I don't know.


Point is, i don't know how you'd change the first part of this- i don't think you need to.

I just want more.

It's a drug. p


CM chapter 16 . 10/17/2007
Waah, I wanna know hat happens next! *_*

I love your story, can't wait for the next update. .'

The angst is all good if it ends happy.
1986 chapter 16 . 10/16/2007
Great Story!
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