Reviews for With Intent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH GOD WITH THE CLIFFIES! You SO blindsided me with that one, considering you sent me that lovely note first. I'm very, very upset with about this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I've decided that I like this story. The first chapter was, I don't know. I had trouble getting through it. But the ones since then are great. ) Mandraco. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG. What the FUCK just happened there! Holy SHIT. ohmygod. What happened? Who's talking to him? O_O I need to read MORE! :O I hope you update soon! Ah... this is so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh so that's how he started seeing these 'visions'. Lol write your story FIRST and then you can read Hands Off :P It's pretty different from yours, even the way the guy got the 'power'. It's also sorta hard to find... there aren't any internet versions of it :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_O ...Oh~ Me likey very muchly! ...I hope they are all okay... XP *puppy eyes for quick updates* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing I love it already Adam is such a individual character and even 3 chapters in I just wanna squish him (thats a good thing lol) keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! So sad, that story about Adam finding his brother in the garage. And that's the one death he wants to see. Really sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. The beginning was a bit confusing at first, but I got it XP I'm a bit slow sometimes _; You know what? This skill reminds me of this manga I read recently called Hands Off. One of the guys could see what had happened before, and then track down somebody by using these visions. And in hospitals and stuff, there are a lot of intense emotions because deaths happen, and he practically breaks down because of all the crap going on around him which he can't handle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adam's OCD is sort of amusing, with all the precision. I like this. Just make the paragraphs shorter, the big ones scare me XP Yar, onto next chapter :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, what must it be like to see all of that crap all the time? I wouldn't want to cursed that way. Great update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just discovered this story! Very strong, and really likeable character! I think this plot is quite fascinating in the supernatural aspect, and the hint of romance draws the reader in even further. I think Adam seems adorable and I really want to know where this is heading! The writing is excellent as usual. Great work! On my alerts now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *fan-person squeal* Adam is very cute! And I like this fic very muchly! *puppy eye beams* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start! Adam's a very interesting character. |
![]() ![]() Ok I do not ever comment people ever. I lurk and thats it. But I am in love with your writing. Please don't stop this story it's awesome. |