|Reviews for With Intent
| Piper Ross chapter 21 . 3/16/2012
I just read all of this in one sitting, and i absolutely loved it!
Seriously, an awesome concept and really great characters (totally believable, like all the time).
I just loved this story. My only criticism would be that the ending was rather sudden, but I'll take it, as the rest was pure flawlessness in my eyes.
Thanks for posting!
| HeavensInferno chapter 21 . 3/5/2012
This is maybe the third or fourth time that I have read this story and I just wanted to (finally) tell you how much I adore this story. Adam's crazy habits, the mystery around Amy, Joe's behaviors and personality, Edie's meddling; I loved every second of time spent reading this story. It was a great read. :)
| emmie.ray chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
I love this story sooo much ;)
| Addiena Saffir chapter 21 . 2/21/2012
Loved loved loved adam's character. So neurotic and spastic I really hope you follow through on the series idea. I would love to see how these work it out, and more info on what went on with amy and benny would be good too...as long as no actual sexual abuse took place because if that is the case i can skip it.
| Asebi chapter 21 . 1/29/2012
I love Adam and how you've written him. The story wasn't quite what I had expected, but I really like how it did end up.
| Merzilla chapter 21 . 1/29/2012
God, I feel like I'm going to be thinking about this story for awhile. I know so many people have commented saying similar things, but thanks so much for an incredible story! Adam was such a great character, I actually found myself almost crying because of how sad he was throughout the story. My heart really felt for him and I was just praying that his luck turned around. I'm so happy they kissed, so happy they are together, even though Joe's school memory thing kind of upset me. But I was actually sad that there wasn't any fluff :( because I'm weird like that lol. I wanted to see Joe and Adam get passionate and crazy! Therefore, I would love to see a sequal, even though I see that this story was last updated in 2008 so I doubt that lol.
Anyway, thanks for a great story, I think you are an amazing author and definitely an inspiration!
| Xandrea chapter 21 . 12/22/2011
This was great. You are an amazing writer. I loved this. Very different. I love how it played out. :)
| The Green Eye chapter 21 . 12/12/2011
This was absolutely the best story I have read in a long time!
It was so awesome! The ending seemed a bit rushed but I still loved it! :D
| Wakes to Dream All Night chapter 21 . 12/4/2011
Aw, I loved the entire story! Funny, cute, dramatic. :D
| WhyWeWashTheWindows chapter 21 . 11/4/2011
This story has kept me up and turned me a little bit crazy. Amazing.
| jollyroger chapter 21 . 11/3/2011
That was one awesome story. You paint such hilarious and wonderful pictures with your words, only now I can't get the one about god and his peanuts out of my mind LOL! Am always going to think of that when life sucks. One of the best stories I have read, pls. continue to give us more of your great stories.
| TheeManagedMischief chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Okay I love this story I read the entire thing and died because it was so good
and I was wondering if I could possibly make a comic out of your story? I've drawn what I think the characters would look like to me and I would love to send it to you
Sorry if I'm bugging just really wanted to ask XD
| Shadoe0806 chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Amazing story! I am so glad I read it. You have extraordinary talent. I am extremely jealous. Bravo!
| Shadoe0806 chapter 16 . 9/22/2011
First off I think this is an amazing story! I should have reviewed before now. I have been tempted to but haven't for some reason. I really like this chapter. The way he was thinking and acting made myself imagine him being slipped Ecstasy. I have a feeling that is what you were going for and I think you captured the experience very well. Specially for a first time. I love Adam. He is so adorable! I am truly going to be sad when I get to the end. You are amazing. :D
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 21 . 8/17/2011
amazing job with this story. adam is so realistically and awkwardly human. bravo!