Reviews for Maid for Me
Veronica Kimble chapter 25 . 3/6/2008
i usually love cliffhangers. but urs is SO FRUSTERATING ME! leaving me in suspense!im alittle dramatic rite now but UPDATE SOON!

miki248 chapter 25 . 3/6/2008
this story rocks! hope u get to the next chapter soon oh and the only thing is that i think it should be a little bit longer for the chapters but other wise good work love this story poor mina though...
chittychatty14 chapter 25 . 3/6/2008
your stories r awesome...hope i get to see your books on the bookshelf soon! can't wait
fan chapter 25 . 3/5/2008

jadien cant fall for this emma chick!
Veronica Kimble chapter 24 . 3/5/2008
wedding dress shopping! how cute! update soon!

Chelsea chapter 25 . 3/5/2008
OMG! such a twist... I like it, can't wait to see what happens!
lisa-mazing chapter 25 . 3/5/2008




just passing by chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
I enjoyed reading this story during the first few chapters, but then it seems as though the story just putters out into disjointed, random scenes.

Mina was so adorable at first, but now she's just annoying. Her emotions are constantly shifting and there's really no direction to her character.

Jaiden doesn't even seem like a realistic person anymore. He's just there.

The point of view switches from Jaiden in three sentences to Mina the next few and back again to Jaiden. They don't allow us to relate with one character for a period of time.

I know you're working on the real, to-be-published version of this, but I really think you should put as much effort into this as you can, instead of typing up a few sentences at a time. It's a lot to ask, but as a reader who really loved the story, a genuine ending would totally make my day and be appreciated by your other readers, too.
Daniela chapter 25 . 3/5/2008

that was so sad! But I still love it!

can't wait till next chapter!
Silencia chapter 25 . 3/5/2008
No Mina! Don't cry! I'll beat him up for you!

Anyway, great chapter, sad, but great!

And I know you love hate comments, but I'm not able to make a hate comment to this wonderfull story!
midnightbeauty chapter 25 . 3/5/2008
**gasp** Stupid Jaiden! Stupid Anna! **angry, muy, muy angry** OK I hope you update soon with better news!


Sumi chapter 25 . 3/5/2008
Poor Mina... *smacks Jaiden* Don't be an idiot! .
koerle chapter 25 . 3/5/2008
This is a beautiful story! And you really have a pleasant wirting style.

I wonder If Mina is going to confess her (previous) love for Kiterin. Jaiden just has to notice her strange behaviour around him.

Getting Anna back in the story - or in his life, even if it is just for the moment, is a nice twist!

They are moving fast. Can't wait to see where they'll end up!
Nina chapter 25 . 3/5/2008
poor poor Mina !

wat the fuck is Jaiden doing?

Mina is so much better than that stupid woman Anna !

and now, he's breaking Mina's heart ...

(by the way ;; love your story ;) !)

Lj chapter 25 . 3/5/2008
oh no! no no no! poor Mina!

too short!

update soon!
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