hi Bomee, i really love ur story M4M! i was really into it until i saw that chapter 19 was the last one u wrote and i got really mas because i really wanted to read more especially when Jaiden and Mina confessed their love for one another. I really want to read more of it because it's really good, so let me know when there's more.

~Sincerly,

Carman Pruitt (a.k.a. Kai)

lol another cliffhanger...Oh well your writing's so good that I can forgive for that lol..I'd love for ya to send me an email when you get the e-book finished..

it would be nice to have a long chapter soon :P

but thanks for updating !

i enjoyed it alot.

YAYZZ! They ish finnally together! MORE! MORE I SAY!

Good Gob! Your an awesome writer. I cant wait for the rest. I hope she ends up with jaiden

Awesome-ness. Such a sweet chapter. I'm glad that Mina and Jaiden finally are together. I can't wait for the next chappie.

Ciao.

~ShyAngel88~

This story is like one of the best stories I've ever read :)) Haha. Good thing I played some of your games on Newgrounds, or else I have never found out about this story :)) I commented on some of your games on Newgrounds.. my username is LasagnaFreak03.. yeah, like you care about my username, right? Haha :)) Anyways, your stories are great, cant wait for you to update and post a new chapter again :)) Good luck in writing a new version of this :)) Hope I can read it, Lol :)) Haha, anyways, once again, love your works :))

Godspeed

please do not let that bitch emi be the future mother in law

make her go something like die or something i dont care

i like mina

mina ftw!

im sorry if im mean but emi is so ew

Heh I actually was gonna nominate this anywho when I can for Skow :) Emi's such a rotten ice bitch . But I'm so happy Jaiden and Mina finally got their acts together! **claps** Update soon! Merry Christmas & winter holidays in general :D!

Kisses,

midnightbeauty

o0o i like it!

anyway, you say you are writing another version?

can people read it somewhere?

if so tel me

dayum freakingn awesome.

I hate Emi.. she's a bitch...I'm happy that Jayden is falling in love with Mina cant wait to see what happens next

Gosh i hate Emi. Mina's mom should also pay her due as should Emi for being selfish and treating Mina like that. Emi should get some sense knocked into her that she's not all that as Jaiden's dad treated her as some whore and nothing else. Please update soon. I would love to see Jai's and Mina's love triumph over all else.

i love this chappie!

more more more!

beanie :D

damn. wow. love, it's so beautiful. update when possible. stupid Emi. i hate her.