| Reviews for Maid for Me |
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   leemya chapter 1 . 12/6/2007 LOVE YOUR STORY |
| Jelzia chapter 18 . 12/5/2007 It's really good so far! I really love it! :3 looking forward for more good luck in publishing Maid for me! |
| Keira chapter 18 . 12/5/2007 I love love LOVE Maid for Me! It's my favorite story to read and I hate reading! ] I aslo like the other stories you wrote. you are very talented. please, quickly write and upload the next chapter. I can't wait to see Jaiden's reaction! I cam't wait to see if you publish Maid fo Me as a book! I wish you the best of luck! |
| hanahan chapter 18 . 12/5/2007 hmhmhmhm YES..AT LAST MY PLAN CAME TRUE MUHAHAHAHA...just kidding what i meant is that finaly mina confessed her fillings.- |
| dlaina chapter 18 . 12/4/2007 i love where this story is going. write more as soon as you can, im dying to know what happens next. good luck with getting published. if you do im gonna have to buy this book] keep up the good work! |
| K.R.F chapter 18 . 12/4/2007 this chapter's awesome i hope u write more! |
| silvershadow23 chapter 18 . 12/4/2007 damn... this calls for an update? i wonder how he's gonna react...P looking forward to more! Silver |
| MzKoko chapter 18 . 12/4/2007 MINA CONFESSED! WoW! Great chapter as always Bomee. To Bomee, Read my story Westchester Academy. Oh and I'm joing the Seventeen writing contest. To Everyone, Please read my story! People have told me its great! LOL |
| Kagome3007 chapter 18 . 12/4/2007 Wow, I feel like fainting... Course, that could have SOMETHING to do with the fact that I can't breath, but that has nothing to do with this review! Wow, I hate you! I mean, I love you cuz you write such good stories, but I hate you for doing cliff-hangers like that! It's so mean! *ahem* Fabulous chapter, as always. The ending was really good. I like that he got suspicious of her, and then she just hit him with the confession. Very cool. Even though the cliffhanger was evil. -If you don't like constructive criticism, do not pass this line- I think that the pacing of the story is a little fast. They've known eachother for almost two weeks now, right? I think it's a little soon for him to be proposing and for her to be swearing her love, you know? Especially since this story is supposed to be set over the course of three months. Unless you have the pacing of the other two and and a half months already planned out? For a story online, it's fine, but for a book I think time should move a little faster. (by which I mean, the pacing of the chapters is great, but the actual time that's passing inside the story is slow.) -End of constructive criticism- Well, as I said, fabulous story, fabulous chapter. Can't wait for the next one! _ Bye bye! |
| xxxxxxxdeadaccount chapter 18 . 12/4/2007 OMG! if u don't carry on soon i'll cry! _ um... btw, YAY! _ |
| Jeadra V chapter 18 . 12/3/2007 MINA CONFESSED! yay yay yay! do update soon, i can't wait! beans :D |
| shadowgirl618 chapter 18 . 12/3/2007 AHH. You can't just stop there! XD Do update soon! Love the story so far. Sometimes a little choppy but little editing is all it needs. ] /shad |
| Daughter of Water chapter 18 . 12/3/2007 THIS IS A WHOA EMi ... MINA CONFESSED OMG THAT IS SO AWESOME |
| shadowgirl618 chapter 9 . 12/3/2007 "Between her a Cousin Kit, there was something going on and Jaiden didn't like his house full of deceit. " I didn't understand the first half of the sentence, because you may have meant "and". Just thought I'd point this out before continuing. XD /shad |
| Jay827 chapter 18 . 12/3/2007 ah. she told him oh my my. wow. *starts hyperventilating* wow. you really need to update. what will Jaiden say? will he say he loves her too? wow update. like this week? this month? something this year before January? |