Reviews for Maid for Me
mm chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
AH! even though i stopped reading i ctached up in 1 hour and it is too good, this will be a best selling i tell you! BEST SELLING! Well good luck with the publishers, byee!-_-

M_M
Riley Hunter chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
OMG. I HATE YOU. I also LOVE you. Dang it...excellent chapter. It is making me scream so loud because I'm happy yet still sad about Kit...excellent chapter again
sophia chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
Omg! Omg! Please update quickly! I'm dying to find out what happens next! Hurry!
Selena Lyle chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
love it :) jaiden && mina aree the perfect couple x]
chiinois chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
SQUE :)
reeta chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
amazing :D
Cara chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
OMG. You HAVE to update quickly ok? I'm gonna die of impatience, this is such a cliffhanger! You rock though and good luck )
Lii-chan chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
OMG! *faints* NEXTCHAPTERNEXTCHAPTER! THIS..CHAPTER..IS..SOLEY..THE..BEST! *Calms down* I've been checking here every day to see if another chapter is out, AND NOW ITS HERE! AND YAYZ! Now youvve GOTTA post the next chapter ASAP! Or else, I''l like, DIE! You are TOATALLY my FAVORITE Author and when its published, I am gonna buy the hardcover and the softcover and the plush toys and the book marks and all the stuff that has "Maid for Me" printed on it even if I don't need it! I shall give a copy to all my friends for their birthdays and MAKE SURE they read it at least 10 times! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS!
Sumi chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
E! New chapter, I'm so happy! You're good at cliffhangers T_T Good luck getting this published, it's a work of art!
Anon chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
The story is progressing nicely. I'd like to point out that:

There are some spelling errors (which might just be caused by your keyboard)

You make mistakes when re-writing commonly used lines. They may sound the same or similar, but when you write it, it's completely different. You might want to get an editor or something of the sort OR you could just use the Microsoft Word spellchecker...
a little girl chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
first of all i wanna say... UPDATE PLEASE hahahah c: this was quite short but i'd still love to know what's going to happen next! c: great chapter! UPDATE SOON! c:
Kaida Rose chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
OMG! I screaming in my little head cheering! It's like you slowly lead up to this moment where she's in love with him! I love this couple! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

I love the dramtic moment at the end where Jaiden feels betrayed, it's touching. And then Mina tells him everything... not everything exactly but about Emi at least. She did leave out the thing about Danni and Kitern! I am just a bit paranoid this will turn out bad!

Well at least I know they love eachother now!

I highly doubt she is lying seeing as how fast her heart is beating... YAY! She has someone better for her! Kitern loved that other girl...

This book is really good! It's on its way! Anyway... Keep it up! I loved this!
dominique chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
its about time u started 2 wright again i luv this chap cant wait for the next hope its comin soon
crystalcleardestiny chapter 18 . 12/3/2007
yay a new chapter i love this story but that emi gets right on my nerves. but mina and jaiden are so sweet and danni is so protective its nice i liked this chapter (apart from emi gr i think i hate her) thank you for writing some more
shadowgirl618 chapter 2 . 12/2/2007
As Mina plops into the limo, I read:

“How’s this for French maid Jaiden?” Mina laughed evilly, sitting next to Bunion on the comfy leather seats of Jaiden’s ritzy limousine.

But I am not sure what Mina means by her question...

Just thought I'd point this out before moving on to the next chapter! :)

/shad
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