amazing update!

dude seriously though how long do you

think it takes to update?

i'm very impatient

Hi. I really love this story! It captures the readers heart and let us have an urge to continue reading till the very end without stopping. Mina is a nice character with a kind heart and a sparkly personality. Things that happened between Mina, Jaiden, Kiterin and D.I.M make me cry and then laugh. It is an excellent story with a nice plot. Maybe add some twists to the story. Please continue on the story. Can't wait! (:

awesome, it so is!1!8

This has got to be the best story /ever/.

I am in total awe of your talent.

So, I have only one request:

PLEASE KEEP ON MAKING YOUR GAMES AND KEEP WRITING THIS STORY! D

...

That's two actually.

o_O

Your fan,

Tales

I love your story maid for was so sweet how Jaiden kissed Mina right there in the garden.

OMG this is the best book i have ever read when is the next chapter comingor has it been published soo i can buy it! i did not see anything that should be changed itss brilliant x

This story is great. I love it; it is so funny, witty, and fresh. I think Jaiden is super gorgeous and I love Mina…and Mini-Min. All your characters rock, as does their interaction. Great job. I hope we get an update soon I am like dying over here to see what’s gonna happen.

~ SFF

Wonderful! I had to print it to be able to read it freely whenever I want... Although,I don't know any part to improve. All I can say is Beautiful story.

i love this

i love this book when the next chapter coming?

oh my gosh! that was absolutely amazing :]

you're a terrific writer! although in the beginning, i caught alot of mistakes and errors, it turned out to be a page-turner :)

please update soon! I hate suspense "/

I really love it :) I hope Mina ends up with Jaiden :)

i love ur story. . its so funny yet sweet at the same time. sad thing is, its hard to find a good story on the shelves. since some r too fake and need i say desperate. but ur stories r really unique. keep up the good work! xD

THAT was awesome i love to read these! SO PLEASE make more i want to know what happens!

i love this omg girl when u gonna finish this i write stories to but on paper. but their all tradegys. oh and if u answer me just make an authors note. dont have email

OMG

This is by far one of the best and most fave story i ever read!

Can ya send me the link thing for when it's finishd please?

Great book- Good job x x