the story is really good but would you please write more

OMG THAT WAS WHOA ... AMAZING THE DRAMA WAS SO INTENSE

i hope u will put up more chatpers :)

thank you for putting up this one

i really really enjoyed this. i stayed up til 4am to finish it off. please say theres goin to be a sequel or more or summit.. i wanna know what happenes :)

I love Made for me !

I really love it and dont know, what I could say more.

Its so romantic and dramatic - Just can say I love it!

I lovelovelovelove Maid for Me. I found it off of your games on Newgrounds, haha.

I really want the full ebook when it's done. My email is to the left.

I'm so glad Jaiden has feelings for Mina. I was getting really upset when he was just like, "It's all an act, yaddayadda."

ANYWAYS! I love you and your stories.

awesome! can't wait for more! it's getting pretty exiting .~ would be pretty cool if Emi saw Mina there *grins evily* :D

drama drama drama

so emi is having revenge for jaiden's father

mina ...cunfused?

jaiden...um cunfused as well or mybe can't admit his fillings.

kitrin(uh why can't he be jelous.)

danni is a good friend

Whoa! Awesome story. I'm so glad I chanced upon this. _ Your characters are so alive and the way you write has definitely drawn everyone in. I agree with keep us updated about the book! I'm dying to get a copy when it comes out. :D Keep up the awesome work!

I'd say Emi's almost voilated but she let him do that... although if she was under eighteen that would still be considered as rape. It's kind of disgusting...

Anyway I read the latest chapter and it was good! I thought you were only focusing on Jaiden perspective? Oh well at least in most chapters his perseptive is there!

Very good chapter. I liked it.

Maybe try to add more adjitive? Sorry that's the only cristism I can think of. The chapter was formed perfectly.

WOW. Thats all I can say. Your story is Very good! I am practicly dying to find out how it ends. Some -alot- of material seems a bit inapropriate to me ( but after all I am only 13. which would explain the lack of my being able to spell. -.- ) I enjoyed reading your story and like I said I can't wait to read the ending. Personally I like love stories ... so you see why I like this one so much. Daphane and Ivy are butt nuggets. Madi's ok. Enough of my rude oppions. GREAT STORY! LUV UR GAMES 2 xD

_ I love it. Very nice.

wow! wow! i am so loving the storyline. this is one of the few books i am currently reading that constantly leave me wanting more! love it!

awesomee. the character aare confusing. update soon.

OMG! I love the new twist of Emi, I always thought that Jamesan was bad. and her friend and Aroon, poor girl. he kinda scares me good addition to the story though. I CAN'T wait till the next chaper. Oh and how old are they... maybe you could do a bio, that's what my friend dose when she writes stories. She's about to get a book published! II could email the bio if you ?s she uses if you want, just email me.

P.S. don't let those big time writers push you around, someday you'll be famous, i can tell by the way you write :)

bye!

I really like how you right these stories i read all of the stories and poem you wrote. I find them funny and interesting. I really like the stories and realsistic they can be! You should put this into a book!