ok! guys point of view now?

aw u started it over it was getting good are u gonna still finish the Mina version on the story but not on fictionpress?

why did you start it over?

i think that you should have left the other version up and finished it, and then if you still wanted to change it then you could come back and re-write it.

but i guess its not my decision...

i wanna cry you pewp. :( For a deprived widdle citizen like me, fictionpress is one of the few sites that haven't been blocked by my mean, troll-esque daddy. D:

But if publishing will make you more successful and if it will help you spew out more wonderful writing, then I will resignedly accept. :) I wish you the best of luck and I thank you for the remainder of the story though Jaiden's point of view. Keep it up! :D I'm rooting for ya!

You have just ripped mi heart in 2! I've been waiting for the new chapter for about 20 days :( i'm very dissapointed that your writing in Jaidens point of view...i really want to know what happens after the kiss! First you leave me hanging and know you never come back to take me off the clothes rack...CRUEL indeed. Oh well i guess all your trying to do is protect your work.

I was dissapointed about no more m4m on the internet, but this is good too! I LOVE this chapter! Good luck explaining Jaidens Conceited behavior! I am going to LAUGH every chapter you bring out, because all your works are romanticly hillarious! YAY M4M!

hm. interesting change but i was so looking forward to chappie 17. Argh! :'( O well ;)

Ladee B

At first, I was a little disappointed that part 17

didn't came and the story didn't continued ...

(that's because I like it so much and I want to know how it ends

maybe also because I'm not very patient xP )

But now that I thought a little about it ...

Well, I think it's a great idea to see

the story through Jaiden's perspective :D

And I think that I'm going to like him more too :]

It also gives the story an interesting and original twist

So ... I can do nothing but love it !

If "Jaiden's" part's going to be as good as Mina's

Well, than I'll be perfectly happy ! :D

Love (all) your stories and

I admire you a lot and I think you're one of the best writers I know ! (and I read A LOT ! xP )

Anyway, thanks for your stories,

they gave me a lot to think about :] xx

(sorry if my english is bad xD

my mother tongue is dutch,

because I'm from belgium, so ... :p :D)

omgosh i thought waiting two weeks was long but now i have to wait till 2008 :( and the story was getting good! but jaidens still awesome.

WHat are you doing this was the first chapter!

Wowee Bomee! I gotta say, you sure surprised me there. I came back to see "1 Chapter!" Heh. But that isn't the case. I must applaud you on your creativity, thoughI don't quite understand your plan. Good luck, though...and could you please contact me, and update me on your story, and what your plan is for M4M? I would definately buy this if it were a book. :)

okay, so will the original version ever be online?

and this version is going great

but i still loved the old one

oh wells

good luck with the pulications and stuff

ah, since when did you start over?

Im really happy that maid for me will be in jaidens POV but will we get to read to whole thing or will we not be allowed to read the end? if you have to continue in jaidens POV please finish it!

It's really nice but I'm very dissapointed that Maid for Me in Mina's perspective was discontinued. :( I probably can't buy the book which is why I'm kinda sad that I can't finish it. Though, I am happy that you at least thought of us to post it in Jaiden's perspective. Way to go! (: