Reviews for Maid for Me
K.R.F chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
hey! when r u gonna write the next chapter, just asking,*straining* well, again i'm still reminded of that promise..heh.
genD chapter 16 . 9/6/2007
YOUR STORY IS LOOVELY! :D

Okay, introduction:D Was feeling bored and chanced upon your dating games. Which futher led me to your deviantart account and this.

I'm thirteen this year (JUST ONE MORE MONTH! ROAR.). My english has proved to be rather good when i was 8 years old, always getting about 85%-90% for my english tests. Up 'til my standard was remained the same. I think this is because of my reading books since young. Ever since I was 5 I've read dozens of Enid Blyton books and though I do not read them now (donated them all) I still read. ALOT. :D

I'm really into Teenage Fiction, especially those with that touch of sarcasm (reminds me of ME. LOL. I'm actually really sarcastic in real life. I also have a lovely sense of humour, too.) and wit and humour. And what makes me more engaged is ROMANCE. Love it loads.

My fave book til this date is Meg Cabot's The Mediator series, which as humour, wit, sarcasm, romance and also mystery. Love the story
danni chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
i really enjoy this story and how long does it take you to write more. and when are you going to add some more i really want to know what happens next
Blazeyboo chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
Cant wait to see how this is going to end love your stories!
Nina chapter 16 . 9/3/2007
when is the next piece comming ?

I've been waiting like for ever ;p

(and I don't think my heart can take this any longer ! xD)

you're story is just TOO damn good ! o_O :D

please, make a part 17 soon :D xx
angelbookreader chapter 16 . 9/3/2007
when are u gonna get the next one out?
L-U-N-A chapter 16 . 9/3/2007
I'm just reading by all the chapters of 'Maid for me' and I want to read the last chapter .

Is the last chapter done yet? I'm hungry for more stories . And it's obvious the 3 muffled words are 'I love you'!
kitkat chapter 16 . 9/2/2007
OMG! I love you so much Bomee! lol, not like THAT! I mean, I love your stories! And I love your writing, and your dating sim games, and your awesome site! You are so awesome. I am a 13 year old writer. I love to write too, and you are one of my inspirations! your rule! And one day I hope I can write as great as you do! Keep on making stories, and please, please, please, please, (i'm down on my knees begging you), please write more stories and please write TONS of chapters of Maid For Me, i just absolutly LOVE that story! It is really cool, and I will buy the book when you get published, because, like you, i am a writer and i know what it feels like to get reviews and to get published, I have tried so many times to get published and yet people these days won't accept me, and I'm a good writer, but of course, not as good as you. i also love to read. Anyway, thank you for writing your work and thank you for making and thank you for all the things you do.

your devoted #1 fan,

kitkat
K.R.F chapter 16 . 9/1/2007
whoah!nice game...that is,on the site, but i also mean in the story too..heh..heh. well, i'm really hopin the new chapter will be a comin pretty soon, i'm over my little emotin rollercoaster...that reminds me, thanx 4 the new chap, it was right b4 skool!your improvin very well, your letting your other readers hang of a cliff at the end of this chapter which has a nice touch 2 it!i know i'm a burden 2 u but can u go a little more after 20 chapters...please! i know u can do it that's why i want to push u 2 the level!ya know i luv ya!

sniffing,

K.R.F
kira chapter 16 . 9/1/2007
OMI GAWD THAT LAST CHAPTER WAS A TOTAL NAIL-BITER! PLEASE KEEP WRITING MORE! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! [so much kissing ;3 teehee xP]
LemonVanilla chapter 16 . 9/1/2007
Oh... god, this is soo sweet... I'm so glad that Mina's over Kit! And those moments between Jaiden and her, is so cute and wonderful! Not an act, but all real!

You're doing great on this story! Please update soon!
Teh Nachozorz chapter 16 . 8/31/2007
I was like, cursing outloud when I read that Kit doesn't like Mina in that way. Srsly. I thought they'd be such a cute couple to. ( Ohwell. Keep up the awesome work, Bomee. _
lala chapter 16 . 8/31/2007
can someone summerize this for me please?my head is bursting with stress so i keep on doing something else and not read this...
Clautje3 chapter 16 . 8/31/2007
very nice written

I luv it! can't wait for the next one

keep on writing

GRTz
Skylark chapter 16 . 8/30/2007
OMG, I LOVE YOUR STORY! However, it makes me wish that someting like that would happen to me... HAH, I can't wait for your net chapter. I think Kit is a butthead, by the way... And Aaron is a hoe ] But I like Mina D
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