Reviews for Maid for Me
Meisha chapter 16 . 8/27/2007
Kya! Oh my gosh! I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. You're very talented, Bomee. Good luck with writing~~I can't wait for the next chapter! .
bec chapter 16 . 8/27/2007
i loved the detail in this chapter- it was riviting (sp?).

I also loved it how you managed to fit emi into the mix

keep on going!
obsessivecompulsivehobbit chapter 16 . 8/27/2007
OMG! Your story is amazing! You say you work all week and still have the time to write soo talentedly? And written so much in such a short period of time? Then i am practically radioactive with jealousy! Please don't stop writing this, i need to know Mina's story will end! I eagerly await your next installment, please try not to take too long. )
rohan chapter 16 . 8/27/2007
cool! i like this chapter. hahahaha. i can't wait for the next one. wonder if they'll admit they love each other after that.
TheQuilAndInk chapter 16 . 8/27/2007
Great chapter yay i'm so happy that finally Jai and mina are having a thing can't wait for more :]
screennameless chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
Oh my God, you must continue this. JaidenxMina is awesome! And I totally understand the whole Kit situation (has had it happen to her many many times).

By the way, I found this through your Newgrounds. I like your dating sims, but you need to find an easier way to keep track of hp and days. :P

Anyway, keep up the good work!
txinyainyahoo.com chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
oh my goshd! i was wondering when this would finaly happen! awe they're finaly not lieing to themselves and each other! no more games just love! thats the way its supposed to be!
Aya Papaya chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
X3 Cute~ Nice chapter
S.W.A.G chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
OMG i love this jadien loves mina jadien loves mina jadien loves mina yay! finally she kisses him back
Fleeting Moment chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
Finally, that was perfect! UPDATE!
toeskater91 chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
i absolutly loved the detail in this chapter

emi's character is nicely developed, wonder what trouble she'll cause

yay, mina and jaoden!

keep up the good work

update when you can
danni chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
i like the story it is iteresting
Snowmiddy chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
SQUE! omg, how is Emi going to react when she finally sees Mina? Will Mina convince Emi to refuse to dance with Air, or maybe Mai will refuse to dance with him? can't wait for next chapter!
Lady of Confusion chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
OMG! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Erica chapter 16 . 8/26/2007
hey just wanted to say I LOVE this story so much -

thank u for writing it D i really enjoy reading it ~

when the story is finished can u plz send the link to the full ebook when it is complete? thanks :)
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