Reviews for Maid for Me |
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Karamai chapter 14 . 8/10/2007 Hey Love the story! I just found it yesterday and read it overnight it's so good! I was thinking... still doubting, but thinking that maybe you could make it that Mina and Jaiden had knowen each other before they met in the park? I doubt it but please come up with the next chapter soon! Oh yeah hope you get published! |
SAM D chapter 14 . 8/10/2007 ahh! nicenicenice! title from panic! at th disco rights? xD oh gosh! i like where this is going ! |
txinyain chapter 14 . 8/10/2007 yay! its up! man i feel like im a crunchyroll waiting for my fav. anime. |
Daughter of Water chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 OMG I LOVE THIS STORY ITS SO AMAZING |
K.R.F chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 sup, thanks 4 the new chapter, great timing i should say,ther's no complaints here, this chapter is pure gold, but...i smiled when you said her eyes looked like rainbows,i wanted 2 chuckle, but hey i'ts u'r writing, i appreciate it...i don't think guys think of rainbows very often though...keep it up, you'll improve anyhow, can't wait 4 the next chapter!;D |
Jay827 chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 yay 'cousin' Danni. i love her. JaidenXMina. haha. shit Mina is going to be seen with Jaiden in front of Emi. wow. update as soon as possible. |
Fleeting Moment chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 E, HAHA, wow that was funny! UPDATE! |
yuna chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 thank you for writing so fast my uncle said your great at keeping stories going which is really hard to do. him and i would love to read more. and he said he will talk to people then email you. thank you for responding back to me and my uncle. please write more soon and stay ontop. and he will check on and on to see more and make arangements. ~yuna~ |
midnightbeauty chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 Oh shiat. That's not gonna be good. **shakes head sadly** Eww, work 7 days a week? God, that suxx. I babysit 7 days a week, but it can't really be called working...anywho, love this chappie, great writing per usual, but she has seriously got to get over Kit. And poor Jaiden! He's totally falling for her. Aww, he blushed. Hehehe. That's adorable. And who's this wanting to 'have fun' with Danni? _- Hmm, update soon lovey. Kisses, midnightbeauty |
xjennnny chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 awesome-ass-chapter! update soon [: |
Jasmine chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 Hey there. Yeah, its me again. ;] Bomee, I have great news! And when I say great, I mean GREAT! I recently figured out, recently as in, yesterday, that my parents' friends |
crystalcleardestiny chapter 13 . 8/9/2007 this story is amazing you should be really proud of yourself. it's really addictive once you start reading it you just cant wait to find out what happens next. i'd love a copy of the e-book when its finished my email is the way in the first chapter shouldn't it read "catching the brief sadness in his eyes" just a i think mina and jaiden should definately fall in love they have a lot more in common than they think for instance both of their parents care more about i've just realised that i started babbling so moving on i can't wait for the next chapter to come out and thanks for all the effort you must have put into this because its great and a very enjoyable read. |
Freakage chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 So cute! This is such an entertaining read - thanks so much for posting! |
FamousOneLiners chapter 14 . 8/9/2007 you really need to write more and quickly! |
SuperCUTEJensen chapter 14 . 8/8/2007 great chapter...I love this story...I'm happy that Jaiden's falling for Mina...I cant wait to see what happens next hope you update soon |