Reviews for Almost Perfect
purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
you know, funny enough you didnt over use the word 'almost', you pulled it off, very few people can do what you do with words, i'll give you that much ]
I Have Moved chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Woah.. Awesome!

I Love how the is repetition. I think it can make a poem really effective. It touched me, even though its so short. Ending with a question is also really effective, because it leaves the reader thinking. Well done. You're a great writer