Reviews for Dissapointment
Basara chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
am i big a? huh? grammatical error?

nice...
angel953 chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
Your poetry certaintly does not dissapoint me. This was great. I think in your first line you forgot the word "as". If i am not mistaken you were writing a haiku because the lines count out that way...except for the first. Great job as always!

angel 953
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
You're right, it's definitely not fair. Great haiku, I hope things get better.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
Some more very true words. It is not fair. I hope things work out. Great job.