|Reviews for Pretend|
| Ariel of Wonderland chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I love this. I absolutley love this.
"although i'm falling through temptation
things will never be the same
and time is running us in circles
running out and running in
although i'm preaching my forgiveness
i could never live again"
Perfect. Wonderful. Beautiful. Definitely a favorite.
| LOVELYlittleYELLOWbutterfly chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
this is another great poem from you, but all of your poems are. again the last 4 lines are my favorite. And another for my favorites list. keep up the awsome writing!