Reviews for Pretend
Ariel of Wonderland chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
I love this. I absolutley love this.

"although i'm falling through temptation

things will never be the same

and time is running us in circles

running out and running in

although i'm preaching my forgiveness

i could never live again"


Perfect. Wonderful. Beautiful. Definitely a favorite.
LOVELYlittleYELLOWbutterfly chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
this is another great poem from you, but all of your poems are. again the last 4 lines are my favorite. And another for my favorites list. keep up the awsome writing!