this is so...breathtaking. i don't even like chocolate but i'm still captivated.

Wow. A passionate love poem about chocolate.

Something I have never thought of and the idea which I now just love.

So powerful are the words and vivid is the picture.

The temptation and the allure of it is all too real.

And I admit, I have fallen more than once. And everytime more willing.

I think that this maybe the best written love poem of my life.

Almost scandalous in nature.

I just so adore it.

if chocolate were a character... she'd be a conniving seductress! brilliant! i love how you compared eating chocolate and lust! instant, empty gratification. like chocolate, this poem is exquisite. it is worded richly, full of sickly sweet metaphor, and it gives you a kind of rush of emotions! this poem's got me hopelessly addicted. i want more!

nice poem... I don't even like chocolate and it made me wat chocolate...hehehe

absolootly positootly bootiful!

wow- this is beautiful- i like how you compare chocolate and love- i can totally relate! however, i couldnt tell if the tone was positive or negative...

Very good, I added this to my favorites...I want chocolate now...