|Reviews for Rubik's Conundrum|
| Choke on this chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
love the title, your approach to it... something seems a little off though, a little thing most poets face every once in a while.
| AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
This is a really interesting approach to love and its complexity, but it doesn't seem to go the extra mile. The entire metaphor feels a bit too forced. As complex and interesting as love is, your poem (mostly the middle) seems to make the metaphor a bit unexplained. The last line specifically doesn't possess the intuition and solidity the rest of the poem has. This is really a unique approach; you just need to explain a bit more, or better yet, try to make the metaphor a bit more approachable. Outside of that, this is definitely a great poem.
| Kamryn chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
I love extended metaphors... and this suits him so well. Amazing...
But I don't think you're THAT irrantional... _
| David chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
Wow! I think it's really cool, and i like it a lot. It makes me feel appreciated for fixing things like i try to do, and it does so in the most interesting way.