Reviews for Free Fall
locococo chapter 14 . 8/30/2008
i miss your updates! please continue this beautiful story!
emilybh chapter 15 . 8/30/2008
Update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens!
JellyBeaner chapter 14 . 8/30/2008
That was such a good chapter, especially the end part! Keep writing!
gwen chapter 13 . 8/29/2008
ah the suspense is killing me! how many more chapters? and when do we get to the revenge part? i hope he does some hard grovelling in the end for what he's planning to do/will do to rynne and i hope he has some serious competition by then too. with dion maybe? his own bestfriend falling for the enemy? that would be some twist! hahaha! *just playin* i leave the plot development all in your expert hands ) 'very intriguing story though. keep up the good work! ) and please please PLEASSEE continue this story soon! )
Mitchell chapter 6 . 8/29/2008
I like how this is one of the more realistic "get-back-at-someone-themes". I like how you accurately portray the prejudices everyone feels and how that colors the interactions.
Sune chapter 4 . 8/29/2008
Hey, just wanted to let you know if you ever go back and re-write or want to publish, you say that rynne lives in a ranch house like the first or second chapter, but then it changes to an apartment. And whomever doesn't think a cello costs 16k really doesn't know anything about stringed instruments. Good story so far. I really like it.
lollipopamber chapter 14 . 8/29/2008
been checking this story 4 ages waiting 4 da next chapter when u going to add it eagar 2 carri on readin
Lady R chapter 14 . 8/27/2008
I just came across this story and I love it so far. Looks like they really pull Rynne into their little circle. Will the "free fall" begin to occur soon? I'm looking forward to that part as well, but I have a feeling I might have to cover my eyes a bit when that part comes because I can only imagine the pain that is upcoming for Rynne. She is a very likeable character, as I sure that's what you meant for her to be. Update soon!
il capitano chapter 14 . 8/27/2008
hey its a wonderful story

so when are you gonna start making hayden go against rynne

i think u should really start putting the reluctant revenge in because then its gonna add more spicy betrayel to the story with the whole haden-rynne relationship thing going

anyways

otherwise pretty pretty cool story loved it! i heard the plot and thought it wasnt gonna be very catchy -as in a writing style- however you proved me wrong and you've executed all the writing out really well

looking forward to the next chap, plz update as soon as possible
sunshinegirl206 chapter 14 . 8/26/2008
OMG! I cant wait to read more i love it! It's soo good!
Jainblu chapter 14 . 8/25/2008
Squee.

That was so wonderful. After wading through, a few less than wonderful stories... I was giving up hope. Seriously, I was questioning my life time love of stories. But yay it's been rejuvinated. Wo hoho.

aw so honestly ...I have to say... I Love You. _

Thank you

xx

oh yeah.. i spotted a typo...

'fakes' .. at the beginnig.. it was meant to say face right?

Yay i feel all kinds of useful now ]
Jainblu chapter 13 . 8/25/2008
Aww,

This chapter was chuck full of awws.

I love how real it was. How the characters were potrayed, the initial suspicion of Ryne.

Seriously, I really loved this chapter. Not only did it flow seamlessly, but it was really touching too.

I loved this chapter so much.

Was a bit busy, or I'd have reviewed sooner.

But am happy I did now.

seriously, don't doubt youreslf..

in the words of those American celeb people and child film stars...

you did good kid

(I can't actually remember where IO got the quote from, so I decided to attempt to distract you with talk of America!

Is it working?)

]

xx

take care
awaiting.rain chapter 14 . 8/24/2008
As much as I love this story and where it's at, I really just want to get to the part where Rynne finds out the truth.

Is that hopefully coming up soon?
StarvingxArtists chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
I love this story. I can't wait to find out if Hayden will actually go through with his plans or when he'll finally realize that Rynne isn't quite what he thought she was.

I wonder how Rynne will react when she finds out. Keep up the good work. :)
Kraheera-Raven chapter 14 . 8/21/2008
I hate Hayden. I hate him.
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