Reviews for Free Fall
Jainblu chapter 13 . 8/25/2008

This chapter was chuck full of awws.

I love how real it was. How the characters were potrayed, the initial suspicion of Ryne.

Seriously, I really loved this chapter. Not only did it flow seamlessly, but it was really touching too.

I loved this chapter so much.

Was a bit busy, or I'd have reviewed sooner.

But am happy I did now.

seriously, don't doubt youreslf..

in the words of those American celeb people and child film stars...

you did good kid

(I can't actually remember where IO got the quote from, so I decided to attempt to distract you with talk of America!

Is it working?)



take care
awaiting.rain chapter 14 . 8/24/2008
As much as I love this story and where it's at, I really just want to get to the part where Rynne finds out the truth.

Is that hopefully coming up soon?
StarvingxArtists chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
I love this story. I can't wait to find out if Hayden will actually go through with his plans or when he'll finally realize that Rynne isn't quite what he thought she was.

I wonder how Rynne will react when she finds out. Keep up the good work. :)
Kraheera-Raven chapter 14 . 8/21/2008
I hate Hayden. I hate him.
Eva chapter 14 . 8/20/2008
You have to write more,your story is so addicting
September Sapphire chapter 14 . 8/20/2008
wo! great chapter update soon :)
LivingHell chapter 14 . 8/18/2008
Wow... cute and smoky. can't wait for the next udpate.
hopelessromantic444 chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
amazing story so far!

aw hayden's really falling for her.

i can't wait til rynne finds out about his plan...
sea-dreamer chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
i love this chapter, it made me laugh, so cute lol. just sad wen rynne finds out about haydens plan. but yay! and cant wait till ya update again~!
Haley Jean chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
omg, i totally freaked when i saw this update... so soon!

not that it's bad or anything, of course(

hope you update this saturday( ahahaha.

i love how rynee&paige are realizing all these emotions they haven't felt before.

kinda hoping dion will be talking in the upcoming chapters, he seems like a stoic, hah.

hayden was cute at the end too
Indigo Reality chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
Ok, I don't normally review, but here it goes.

Love this story. I love the characters, plot, everything. I'm not really good at critiquing, so I'm just going to compliment :-P

Hope you keep writing, and posting :)

Aragorn is mine chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
aw man I feel so sorry for Rynne, everyone will have to like do an insane ammount of grovelling after they do that mean thing to her... well anyways update son
JustAnotherLibroLover chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
Hee hee, aw! Update soon please! Love it !
predictablyME chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
uhmm, I tend to ramble so I'm going to keep this simple, and hopefully sweet. Hopefully.

I love this story.

I love Rynne.

I love Hayden.

I love Paige.

I love Dion.

I love character development.

I love this story.

KRahman chapter 14 . 8/17/2008
ah I'm happy you updated this not many of the stories on my fave list are updating so you're pretty much my favorite author right now :)
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