Reviews for Free Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, This chapter was chuck full of awws. I love how real it was. How the characters were potrayed, the initial suspicion of Ryne. Seriously, I really loved this chapter. Not only did it flow seamlessly, but it was really touching too. I loved this chapter so much. Was a bit busy, or I'd have reviewed sooner. But am happy I did now. seriously, don't doubt youreslf.. in the words of those American celeb people and child film stars... you did good kid (I can't actually remember where IO got the quote from, so I decided to attempt to distract you with talk of America! Is it working?) ] xx take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() As much as I love this story and where it's at, I really just want to get to the part where Rynne finds out the truth. Is that hopefully coming up soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I can't wait to find out if Hayden will actually go through with his plans or when he'll finally realize that Rynne isn't quite what he thought she was. I wonder how Rynne will react when she finds out. Keep up the good work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate Hayden. I hate him. |
![]() ![]() You have to write more,your story is so addicting |
![]() ![]() ![]() wo! great chapter update soon :) |
![]() ![]() Wow... cute and smoky. can't wait for the next udpate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story so far! aw hayden's really falling for her. i can't wait til rynne finds out about his plan... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this chapter, it made me laugh, so cute lol. just sad wen rynne finds out about haydens plan. but yay! and cant wait till ya update again~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, i totally freaked when i saw this update... so soon! not that it's bad or anything, of course( hope you update this saturday( ahahaha. i love how rynee&paige are realizing all these emotions they haven't felt before. kinda hoping dion will be talking in the upcoming chapters, he seems like a stoic, hah. hayden was cute at the end too |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I don't normally review, but here it goes. Love this story. I love the characters, plot, everything. I'm not really good at critiquing, so I'm just going to compliment :-P Hope you keep writing, and posting :) Sonya |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw man I feel so sorry for Rynne, everyone will have to like do an insane ammount of grovelling after they do that mean thing to her... well anyways update son |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee hee, aw! Update soon please! Love it ! |
![]() ![]() uhmm, I tend to ramble so I'm going to keep this simple, and hopefully sweet. Hopefully. I love this story. I love Rynne. I love Hayden. I love Paige. I love Dion. I love character development. I love this story. predictablyME |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah I'm happy you updated this not many of the stories on my fave list are updating so you're pretty much my favorite author right now :) |