|Reviews for Free Fall|
| redbugsaresmug chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
okay. so. this is gonna be a long one.
i started looking around here for a new story to start up on since i caught up on the ones im already reading. and i must say, this is like mind boggling. i seriously love this story. and u like updated today in the mist of my reading and i was happy it was with this chapter too. lol. i think i'll have a new yearn for saturdays now.
my character analysis now: hayden-well i want to know how exactly fiona effed up his life. like slept with dylan so the mom left him? but im not sure about his brother...unless she got with him too *gasp* this will be interesting when i find out.
dion-well he doesnt say much to rynne. i get that] but yeesh id thot he'd have a more active role in the game. (and just so i know i got it all straight, wut u mentioned earlier on fiona and his dad was the extent of his hate for fiona and naturally rynne too right. or is there more -not including wutever happened with haydens story cuz i get if there would be since theyve been besties forever)
paige- well i get her. i think in the end she'll feel sorry for what she did, esp since she already kinda is. not much to say about her tho. haha.
the whole orchestra thing- i truly just hope the 'game' comes to an end when she has her concert. at least after. let her have one night, right? lol
theo-is he also called terry? cuz u mentioned a terry earlier and i was confused but figured it was just another nickname for him rather then a new character. but i like him.
dylan-wonder wut happens when he learns who rynne really is. and if how he wants her and hayden 'to be' (even if he doesnt) will change. altho i must say im shocked he didnt recognize her altho im sure they never meant and the fiona thing was like 8 yrs ago or sum mess. haha
and now rynne- wow. i feel SO sorry for her. shes getting played to the fullest! and doesnt suspect a thing, altho she does, or used to anyway. id so be her friend!D haydens a jerk. only cuz hes leading her on like that (plan or not its still wrong) and shes gonna be hurt so much in the end. well granted they go thru with it all. i dont think i wanna read when that happens... psych! haha. but props to her with the cello thing. i hope that doesnt get taken away from her. and i wish i had half as much dedication as her with my flute. i may now be a junior and looking at 3rd chair and LOVE band, but theres no way i can ever be that dedicated. but maybe cuz my fingers wud become permentaley cramped. haha.
and randomness. i think dion and hayden relationship is cute. its like if a girl were to have her best friend, theyd do that stuff, so why not guys right? hehe.
but i'll surely end here. this was seriously a long review. but it had 13 chapters and a prologue in it. 'good job' wudnt work for me with a job like this done. haha. and i think ur getting better with the 3rd pov, so keep up the superb work
| Weeeeeeeee chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
yay, loved this chapter. there wasn't much of hayden but i really liked seeing rynne struggle with her emotions here. she's so nice! i love her.
| notwithoutyou chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
Yay! Go Hayden, finally kissed Rynne :)
I already despise Jillianna, but that's a good thing. She seems like an evil little witch.
Can't wait for more!
| Ciaobellla chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
ah! no! you cannot leave me hanging like that!
hehehhe, great chapter!
| GodHelpUsAll chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
I just love how different your plot is and the emotions displayed in the characters are , it's the best thing you do.:)
| wookborm chapter 12 . 8/16/2008
OK, wait up. Hold up.
I need to clear something up-
At the end of chapter 11, when they go to the nudey club, and Hayden picks up an unnamed girl while she sleeps, who is that?
It's Rynne, right?
It's just... you left out a name... and it may be Paige...
OH, MY GOD.
IT'S NOT PAIGE, RIGHT? THAT'S... HE ONLY LIKES HER AS A FRIEND, SHE SAID SO! AND...
by the way, fantastic chapter! :P i hate jill. :\ she's such a... bitch.
ok, this is supposed to be a review for ch. 12. o.o weird. okay, i'm done
BYE BYE! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| goldenspork chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
I hope it's next Saturday you update. :] Another good chapter.
| sunny chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
AH! Omg, you updated! And really quickly too! Thank you!
This totally just made my day!
Anyways, thank you for the shout out. Loyally, I am now your number one fan and shall check everyday, Saturday or not.
And, I'll review every chapter! I'm soo happy you updated. I'm really curious about Dion now. He rarely interacts with Rynne, does he feel any different than before? And, does he like Paige! That would be awesome if he did!
Excellent job. I'm here, waiting for another fantastic update!
Keep up the good work!
| emilybh chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
| sooner or later its over chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
ah i seriously hermited and read your whole story and its unbelievably amazing!
| Daydreamer-angel chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
I loved it, hopefully u will update it soon.
| Rikayla chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
I had to play some serious catch up, but I'm back! Great continuation of the story! The Hawaii trip seems a little out of nowhere, but the story is fun, so I don't mind. XDD;
Keep up the good work!
| redbugsaresmug chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
this story is amazing so far. i cant wait to read the restD
| Ruby chapter 14 . 8/16/2008
I really liked this chapter, what happened between Rynne and Paige was cute. How you described them playing around reminded me of my sister and I at the beach. Good memorys.
| sooner or later its over chapter 2 . 8/16/2008
just stoppin in to say how brilliant this chapter was and i would stay to say more but i want to keep reading so good job!